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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2008-06-27 08:47 PM



Sum Days

Some days just pass you by,
Along with not much care.
A summer breeze, a time of ease,
An emptiness to share.

Adding up the sumtimes thoughts,
Those too far of touch.
Summer nights the mind rewrites
In quiet times of such.

The silent warmth of summer sun
In swinging to and fro,
Lets old refrain to feel again
The sum of long ago.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-06-27 08:54 PM


What a warm and gentle feeling this gave me,
like being lazily 'suspended' in mid-air
while flying high on the swing-set when I was 7 years old!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2008-06-27 09:04 PM


Thanks, I was spending yesterday summing up my past years~~ in picture and thought.

Just another year gone  by
M

LindsayP
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3 posted 2008-06-27 11:55 PM



A lovely little poem that was a delight to

read. Very well done. much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-06-28 08:21 AM


Happy belated BIRTHDAY WISHES, dear Maureen!

It looks like it was a serene day, for that's the feeling I perceive reading your beautiful words. But then I do wish you to have lots of joy filled days in the new year of life. May you be permeated with new enthusiasm, as the challenges of life find solutions.

Love and hugs.
Margherita


secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2008-06-28 07:31 PM


It is grand to see you gracing these fine blue pages
again with your 'penning'!, lovely Ms. M.!

XGarapanX
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6 posted 2008-06-28 11:34 PM


Beautiful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2008-06-29 10:20 AM


Thank you Lindsay, and Margherita ( yes  another year to start and hopefully more enjoyable now that the worst of the last is over)

Bruce it's always nice to see you here. School has ended and I shall have more time to read and respond and maybe even write a little. Thank you.

XGarapanX, thank you for stopping by, I appreciate it.

M

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-06-29 10:13 PM


I enjoyed your poetic and Beautiful words that you are sharing Nakdthoughts



ARCTIC WIND

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