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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. 
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There's no honer in a stalemate. If I could only change those last few moves but too late. If I could reassess my strategy on clean slate. But I'm not polished at the art of neatly taking my opponent apart. Spent all my youthful days at kids games. Mastering romance was never my aim. I've wanted so long only to treasure the Noble pursuit of innocent pleasure. There's no reason for a rematch. If I'd just stop to think before I jump, can she catch. Or remember sometimes there's an itch you don't scratch. But I'm not polished at the art of keeping my face from expressing my heart. I still remember some old kids game. And conquering lovers just isn't the same. I so long to help you treasure the Noble pursuit of innocent pleasure. Rick Delmonico |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I so long to help you treasure the Noble pursuit of innocent pleasure. This is a noble longing ... and this lovely write can be the first step. Probably we need to apply the quality of "innocence" to a wider range of pleasures ... Love, Margherita  Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well Rick, I would say that you definitely fit in here very well! I enjoyed this though it gave me a bit of sadness...well maybe that's why I enjoyed it? very well done! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Very interesting and clever, Made me smile still remember some old kids game. And conquering lovers just isn't the same. Perhaps it is the logical following of childhood.... enjoyed it all thanks yann |
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