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rad802
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0 posted 2008-06-27 06:55 PM


I'm a dreamer not a do'er a romanticist at a distance,
only seeing never touching, watching you.
Time betrays me as it slays me, I exacerbate my condition.
Not quite feeling, thoughts I'm stealing, dreaming you.

I arrange some possibilities, they disolve into obscurity.
I enlist my motives but they reach a state just short of purity.

I'm a pilgrim in a landscape only talked about in passing,
barely moving, always reaching, wanting you.
As I walk the sun behind me, I see shadows of a multitude
growing longer as the sun sets on my view.

Rick Delmonico

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-06-28 08:03 AM


I think you dream beautifully, dear Rick! To live up to our dreams, reality is deeply challenged I guess ...

Love,
Margherita

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