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marcel
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0 posted 2008-06-24 09:48 PM



Goodbye

I captured her blue tears
In the coming winds pain,
My soul trembling from the chill;
He no longer felt comfort in my heart.

But the man without a shadow,
Lover without a reflection,
Just marveled at the tumultuous skies
As the darkness rolled in with roar
And the flashing lights revealed silhouettes;
Faces masked in shame and sadness.

And as the rain ceased
So did her falling tears
Scattering like joyful butterflies,
In an array of beautiful colors;
Under parting clouds and the rising sun.

Marcel

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1 posted 2008-06-24 11:41 PM


Marcel~
Oh my ... I needed to read something so lovely this night~
Thank you for letting it be your ink-in-flow~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2008-06-25 12:21 PM


And as the rain ceased
So did her falling tears
Scattering like joyful butterflies,
In an array of beautiful colors;
Under parting clouds and the rising sun.

Your ink contains a love spell formula~

~ARH

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