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Topheth
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0 posted 2008-06-24 09:14 PM


One night - I dream sweaty,
two golden piercing eyes -
three moist mouthy minutes;
Four weaving limbs, all
five fingered and desperate.
Six empty days echoing that
seventh - come, my love, come.
Eight sleepy hours awaken to
nine sultry lines which say -
you are a perfect 10!


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graeshine2006
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1 posted 2008-06-24 09:29 PM


Like it... very creative.
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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2 posted 2008-06-25 08:00 PM


Cool piece of writing.

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3 posted 2008-06-25 10:17 PM


how cute!
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2008-06-26 11:06 AM


WOW!



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