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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
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0 posted 2008-06-24 09:13 PM


Light-headed I've stood
before your bronzed landscape and
kissed those mountain peaks

as lightning chased fingers
across your quivering plains.

Lay me deep into your valley
amid the warmest dew where
quakes are yet to come -

I see storms on the horizon and
their fury entices me.


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graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
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The Prairie Lands, USA
1 posted 2008-06-24 09:29 PM


Ummm, yeah.  Sexy, sincere, and subtle. Simply seductive.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2008-06-26 11:10 AM


My screen is melting....

going to take a shower....


Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 297
Texas
3 posted 2008-06-26 12:41 PM


Whoa... me too.  

"You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain."

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
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4 posted 2008-06-27 07:27 AM


Are you Opeth?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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with you
5 posted 2008-06-27 08:20 AM


beautifully done....
Topheth
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6 posted 2008-06-27 07:29 PM


Not Opeth, just Topheth.
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