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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-06-24 04:53 PM



The mountains of Iran,
we cross them with eyes.

Feet they bark as dogs
to frighten the snow.

© Copyright 2008 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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1 posted 2008-06-24 07:23 PM


Incredible.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

marcel
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2 posted 2008-06-24 11:41 PM


very clever...appreciated from this soldier...
2islander2
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3 posted 2008-06-25 03:40 AM


Thank you Garapan and Marcel for your kind comments.

    yann

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-06-25 11:02 AM


Very clever, yann. I would almost think you were there.
                                Ida

2islander2
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5 posted 2008-06-25 02:24 PM


Thank You Ida for your kind comment,It's always a pleasure reading you....
     have a nice day
     yann  

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-06-26 06:45 PM


Minimalism at its best, dear Yann!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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7 posted 2008-06-27 02:25 AM


Thank you dear Margherita for your kind comment, I enjoy very much minimalist poem ...Those of Huan Yi are stupendous...

   yann

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8 posted 2008-06-28 01:53 PM


it's short but triggers thought. personification at its best
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2008-06-28 05:40 PM


Brilliant ~

Enjoyed~

2islander2
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10 posted 2008-06-29 01:20 AM


Thank you Kaile, thank you Romantic Heart for your kind comments

  yann

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