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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-06-23 02:28 PM



Gothic romance


Many pages await,
thousands to touch,
many pleasures to explore,

I desire to savor each,
perfectly, written, planted,
my fingers caress softly,

feeling the smooth texture,
anticipating the words,
that I will eat with my mouth,

tasting the sweet juicy parts,
to escape inside your eden,
allow me to feel every line,

consumed, I cannot walk away,
desiring to see, taste, touch,
more, more, the plot thickens,

I am a slave, my will broken,
passionate stained words,
hold me, bind me, tighter,

Heavy my heart has become,
desperate for air, pains,
beating , thobing inside,

Upon my chest you rest,
till I catch a moments breath,
grasping you in my hands tightly,

I cannot stop, you have me,
bewildered, you are with me,
a part of me everyday,

Master of my thoughts,
as I lay in my hot bath,
gently I touch You,

Upon my cozy bed You sit,
slowly i begin to peel back the layers,
discovering more, intense,

Finally the last one,
empty, with no words,
left to my imagination,

allowing my thoughts shared,
this one is my favorite,
never to be placed upon a shelf.

You have all of me,
my mind cannot escape you,
You are my poetry...

nothing more could ever compare.

© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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1 posted 2008-06-23 06:14 PM


This was awesome! The image, the poetic words, the centered three line stanza's, just everything. Very Lovely poetry.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2008-06-23 10:44 PM


WOW thank You ~

I love to give my readers what they want, and when they are pleased, it pleases me!

Richy
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3 posted 2008-06-24 08:26 AM



How your words so savor
Like sweet likker
In the back of the mouth

Comingling
with engorged buds
On passions
palette

To only swirl off of
tongues tip
Like swollen tears
of liquid satin

Slowly dripping,

Off lillie’s
Morn


Sweet caress
Eyes a rest

Book of silk,
On lips

so pressed

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2008-06-24 02:42 PM


ARH...Passionate write, very smooth flow building up to a great ending. Enjoyed very much...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Rick
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5 posted 2008-06-24 03:29 PM


It was of a book you spoke? Loved all of it my friend, a very passionate write indeed and indeed very well written, enjoyed.

Rick

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2008-06-25 12:51 PM


Maybe a book? maybe Something else?

or someone else?

~ARH

Ericc
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7 posted 2008-06-25 05:11 PM


Truly passionate and and
full of beauty.
As is the poet.

Eric

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