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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-06-23 06:26 AM



I wear my back to the window skin woman
she is smooth and dark and cool
with just reflections to consider

nothing future in her glasses
only across the yesterday street
with some memory sidewalk littering

we feel the highway's heat together
she takes more than my ink does
but she carries it better in her youth

and says it makes her agony hungry
for the night to bring her candles
and lovers doing those word shapes

and would I stay if it were closing time


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daark

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1 posted 2008-06-23 11:01 AM


I'll be back to read again, but I leave now smiling.

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2 posted 2008-06-23 12:45 PM


and would I stay if it were closing time

~**~

betting you would...

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Margherita
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3 posted 2008-06-23 07:13 PM


I feel your spirit of freedom running through these intense "word shapes".

Sort of highway high ...

Love,
Margherita


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-06-23 11:31 PM


ms alisan thanks babe

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ms lauren thank hon

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ms mar, thanks lady friend for the touch

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