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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Quietly shhh...it's okay I silence myself and here I will miss you quietly as dusk turns to night- as fall becomes winter when clouds alight and freeze, as youth leaves to make way for time, through generations handed down in rhyme. I keep my sadness to myself, you'll never see me cry. I still wait for you in each minute passing by and here I will miss you quietly. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
"In the words of a broken heart It's just emotion taking me over" So the song goes~ Hugs for you, Dixie~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Tenderly written. Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing and take care dear lady...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I keep my sadness to myself, you'll never see me cry. I still wait for you in each minute passing by and here I will miss you quietly." yes, exactly... this knows me well...  love it Dixie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: So quietly beautiful, dear Dixie! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each another oldie for lack of inspiration these days |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
but your words are heard loudly by his heart...... |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Dixie, You are/(were?) an absolute genius of poetry. I really don’t know what to say about how never the less your life turned out. I would like to include this, with your permission, in my Word file of poems by others. Maybe, after we’re both gone, students will recite you in the corridors on campus. John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks Keith, I'm glad you heard  John, yes by all means, I am always honored to be included. Thank you. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You know Dixie I have read you for quite a few years now and you have always been a gifted writer but what strikes me now more than anything is how much you have grown into your talent. Excellent write! Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie... beautifully you... and your pic is gorgeous! xx love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Dixie, thank you for the poem, hushh ourselves is deserving and I think make us improving by learning about our thoughts.... so does your poem.... thanks yann |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love the sweet soft side here with your loveliness smiling in the pip window |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww, thank you each so much |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and here I will miss you quietly as dusk turns to night- as fall becomes winter when clouds alight and freeze," you're pulling at my heart strings Dixie you're feeling my mood tonight and that is one big beautiful smile you have there |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Emotions filled Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
it made me cry. God i feel the same way. every word touched me. :'( forgive and forget, |
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