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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-06-21 09:48 AM


        The Unseen

Along this path of twilight
  evening mist,
beneath a mountain moon,
leaves rustle in the empty
  forest…
a gentle breeze, spirits, or
  dreams passing?

        --- b. e. adams (6/21/08)


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1 posted 2008-06-21 09:52 AM


An absolutely delightful write which gives the reader many paths to choose!
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2 posted 2008-06-21 10:50 AM


Seriously. What she said. Rock on!

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3 posted 2008-06-21 08:32 PM


all of the above....beautiful....

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4 posted 2008-06-22 02:02 AM


This is magical.

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5 posted 2008-06-22 11:26 AM


OR...

gnomes!

nod

(It's been "gnome" to happen?)

*groan*

sheesh



sorry

truly lovely!

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6 posted 2008-06-22 12:00 PM


What a lovely, mystical piece this is Bruce.
Just my cup of tea.
                                   Ida

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7 posted 2008-06-23 08:28 AM




oooo..got to love the mysterious....

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8 posted 2008-06-23 09:06 AM


outstanding!!
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9 posted 2008-06-23 01:47 PM


You have a gift to express things that meet more than the eye! Splendid and sublime!

Art  

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10 posted 2008-06-25 07:30 AM


Grealy enjoyed.  Maybe spirits and dreams walk hand in hand in the breeze because I reckon we actually do feel them both when we pay attention.

Helen

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11 posted 2008-06-26 06:42 PM


Beautiful, dear Bruce! In twilight magical things occur ...

Love,
Margherita

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12 posted 2008-06-27 02:41 PM


Beautifully expressed! Greatly enjoyed.
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