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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2008-06-21 06:21 AM








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Freedom in fragments

detours on a misted path

yet trusting the sun


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© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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1 posted 2008-06-21 09:13 AM


What a whispered dreamworld, painted by brush and pen. Beautiful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Richy
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2 posted 2008-06-21 09:31 AM


Dear Margherita, there are so many layers in this celebration of significance.
How come it’s always the detours caused by the clouds of curiosity that always bring some of the most fulfillment.

Great picture.
Greater poem!

Rich

rad802
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3 posted 2008-06-21 09:38 AM


good morning
brief but very interesting

Rick Delmonico

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-06-21 10:31 AM


Just beautiful!





ARCTIC WIND

OwlSA
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5 posted 2008-06-21 12:49 PM


I concur with all that has been said, especially what Richy said.

You have a great talent and we Pippians are lucky to reap the benefits.  

Your poem is richly heavy with meaning, light with love and hope, and a sparkling gem in its entirety, and the picture matches your poem in every detail!

And, if it is your anniversary today, Happy Anniversary to you both - and if it is not, Happy UnAnniversary to you both!  I hope that he is worthy of our Margherita.

- Owl

Sunshine
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6 posted 2008-06-21 03:27 PM


How many years, sweetheart?

And, by the by...

Congrats on 11,000 posts!!!




secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-06-21 07:00 PM


fascinating impressionistic visual and poetic imagery!

applause for this!!

Margherita
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8 posted 2008-06-22 07:23 AM


Thank you, Garapan, for seeing beyond the reality ... I am indeed a dreamer and this quality has saved me many times from falling into melancholy.

Dear Rich, thank you! I love your interpretation! Yes it is no doubt a significant day, as we said "yes" to each other such a long time ago and miraculously survived as a couple. Freedom even though in fragments is necessary.

Thank you, Rick. It's a pleasure to have you reading and commenting so kindly.

Dear Michael, thank you so much for clapping your hands, what is a celebration without that?

Thank you, dear Diana, for your loving comment and for your wishes. Yes, it was a very hot day in the past and it was yesterday too. It's strange to look back ... hmmmm you make me ponder. We no doubt choose each other and thought we were worthy of each other. We doubted that a few times later, but I guess we had to learn some lessons together.

Dear Karilea, oh, I do love numbers, but this one is somehow frightening!!! We are establishing a record ... if you look at young couples how they break up easily at the first difficulties!! Thank you, also for noticing 11.000, compared to you it's a small number, but I enjoyed and still enjoy my presence here on Pip.

Thank you, dear Bruce, I enjoy your applause.

Love to all and have a wonderful Sunday!

Margherita  

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2008-06-22 04:37 PM


From one dreamer to another, Happy Aniversary, Margharita. I was married 42 years when my husband passed away in 2004.
                                  Ida

2islander2
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10 posted 2008-06-22 04:44 PM


Hello Margherita, thank you for sharing this wellcrafted work.

  have a nice day

   yann

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2008-06-23 12:15 PM


Oh dear! I missed my Maga Margherita's anniversary poem on the actual date. Well, think of my saying "Happy Anniversary" as getting a jump on your next one!

~ and yes, always trust the sun! Afterall, it is made of Light!


Angelo Terrestre

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12 posted 2008-06-23 02:35 AM


It's like viewing shattered colors that frame your words.


Beautiful.

KeyLimeSorbet
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13 posted 2008-06-24 02:55 PM


Very beautiful!
steavenr
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14 posted 2008-06-24 04:58 PM


"detours on a misted path"

so visually exquisite...nice imagery

Honeybunch
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15 posted 2008-06-25 07:19 AM


Margherita - I feel as if I've been missing for years instead of months and mmore especially now with the reading of this gem.  Belated Happy Anniversary!  

Hugs
Helen

Margherita
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16 posted 2008-06-25 10:31 AM


Thank you all my kind poet friends for your comments and wishes. Both highly appreciated!

Today I think of my beloved Mother who had warned me ... and I wonder why didn't I listen to her? Youth doesn't like advice, that's it. But, oh, she even was an incredible clairvoyant! Well, it was and is the lesson I choose to learn, obviously!

Love,
Margherita

poddarku
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17 posted 2008-06-25 10:47 AM


it is just wonderful.
Ericc
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18 posted 2008-06-25 03:30 PM


Oh wow Margherita!
This is perfect.

Love,
Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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19 posted 2008-06-25 04:01 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

This haiku, picture combination works very well.

Love Bobby

Margherita
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20 posted 2008-06-25 06:49 PM


Dear Ku, ERic, Bobby, thank you my dear poets for your kind replies, which brought smiles.

Love,
margherita

LindsayP
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21 posted 2008-06-26 12:22 PM



Great picture with words to match

Margherita, much enjoyed.

Love Lindsay

BluesSerenade
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22 posted 2008-06-29 12:59 PM


Your thoughts are so profound and always so full of love and hope.  

You have a wonderful gift Margherita, and I'm so glad you're here.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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23 posted 2008-06-29 01:09 AM


Just beautiful Margherita and Happy Anniversary! you bring such joy and love to our pages blue.. we appreciate you!  love RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

FastForward
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24 posted 2008-06-29 02:44 AM


Sensory packed ---- very nice.
Margherita
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25 posted 2008-06-29 05:21 AM


Thank you, dear Lindsay, Lori, Roniece and FastForward, I so enjoyed your loving replies.
Have a wonderful Sunday all!
Love,
Margherita

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