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WindWalker
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0 posted 2008-06-20 08:09 PM


Are Humans Dumb?

I think this is a rhetorical question:
one only needs to review an election
to answer that! Yes, most people
at least on this benighted world
are certifiably dumb.

Time after time, people will go to the polls –
oh yes, less and less are conned into this
but still, they legitimize this enterprise
of putting liars, cheats, self-serving narcissists
in positions of power.

People give individuals with minds
comparable to those of egocentric feudal lords
power over all aspects of their lives –
and they do this of their own “free” will
thinking they have no choice.

And that’s the point, isn’t it:
do we have a choice or not?
Must we endure ignorant self-serving asses
as “governing” members of society
or can we do without them?
Let’s consider this question logically:
what would we need to get rid of “them”?

Well, we’d need to be absolutely certain
we are morally better than they are.
We’d have to be certain we truly care
about others and about our environment.
We’d have to know we can discipline ourselves,
not oppress our neighbour, not take advantage,
and be there when someone needs our help.

We’d have to obey the law; the laws;
we wouldn’t fight, cause unrest or be disorderly;
we wouldn’t be racist or misogynist –
sharing all the good things equally with all
regardless of class, gender, race.
Oh and most important of all:
we’d have to know that however provoked
we would not hate another – ever.

Well, that’s about it.
If, as a society of intelligent beings
we know we cannot meet these obligations
then we’d better continue to vote,
pay our rising taxes, accept the asses in power
and expect the ever growing worst.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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1 posted 2008-06-21 05:47 AM


quote:
Well, we’d need to be absolutely certain
we are morally better than they are.
We’d have to be certain we truly care
about others and about our environment.
We’d have to know we can discipline ourselves,
not oppress our neighbour, not take advantage,
and be there when someone needs our help.



Yes, you are right, things can't improve by judging others and by flowing with the flow.

As long as we feel lazily comfortable on our own small spot of the world, things will get worse ... those who have savored and succumbed to the privileges of being "in power" will always work for the benefit of themselves and ignore the tremendous acts of injustice perpetrated in whatever society.

They will fight any evolution that affects their own status ... and decadence waits behind the corner to affect ALL. See oil exploitation versus alternatives that could provide energy at much lower costs.... i.e.

The process of awakening to love has been started and I am positive it will slowly, but steadily convince more and more people to open their eyes ...

Thank you for the thought provoking work.

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
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2 posted 2008-06-21 09:22 AM


I have absolutely zero training in poetry so I have to ask the uneducated idiot question, "does this qualify as a poem?" It doesn't seem so at first glance, but there is one thing that I'm certain it does qualify for... voting for you as President! I'll pencil you in on the ballot. You got my vote.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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