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Aching for you
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Aching for you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Aching for you Your whispers stir my quiet waters like puffs of air roaming through the night, softly stroking the well of my soul, which I feel residing in the most inconceivable places under my skin. Like a worshipping ocean I arch towards you my distant power moon, as your translucent fingers dance upon my swelling waves and millions of particles of light spiral through my depths, clinging to my vastness like stardust to a comet. You make me ache for you ... With every fiber of my being I stretch towards the core of you. With fearless boldness I face your tempting flames, ready to achieve an act of faith with my joyous leaps of pure innocence. *** |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Ohhhhhhhhh, marg ... Wat a gentle, tender dream. How vividly you enhance my secret fantasy ... riding sensous rolling waves, climbing to raptu waves with you It makes me feel I do not fantasise alone! Luv ya J |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Jaime, thank you for your loving comment. No, you are not alone indeed, I am right there floating with you in the upper spheres of dreamland. Hugs. Margherita  |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
This makes me cry everytime I read it ... So I will not read it very often. It is too strong ... It makes me fantasize that I am with some one suc as you ... I can not read it ... It makes me cry ... but I will keep it ... Tender tender hugs Jaime |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Margherita, I know I keep saying this, but this, poem is my favorite of your's. That is a real talent when each poem just keeps getting better and better than the previous one. Forget cloud nine, you are on, cloud ten! So Beautiful! Keep it going! Rich |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Margherita, This poem has lots of depth. However, be careful of those flames, you don’t want to think about getting burned. There are loads of other ways to get what you want. Bobby |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
"softly stroking the well of my soul, which I feel residing in the most inconceivable places under my skin." Amazing word wizardry. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes Margherita that is a beautiful sensitive post, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So often your poetry reads like the underside of a rose petal, it is delicate and always so sensitive. Lovely writing, Margherita~ |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear poet friends for telling me you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day! Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very romantically sweet.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
You hold such beauty in your words!! Always a delight |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Maga Margherita this is deliciously and surreptitiously sensuous!  Love the skin you're in! lol  Angelo Terrestre |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
dearest of all, i think you have accomplished to creat an aura of mystical environment and indicate the omnipotence of The power... clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You brought smiles with your loving replies my dear poet friends. Thank you! Have a wonderful week-end! Here it is soooooooooooo hot, we are the hottest spot in Italy today! Love, Margherita |
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