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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-06-19 05:52 AM



this is pizza and those are orchids
seems easy enough to find the fit
in ovens or windows
depending on the chill outside

and from this high in my mind
when the years are taller then trees
looking down there is no difference
and the smells seem to be melding

like the news print on wonderful
when you wrinkle it slowly at first
then into a ball of oblivion toffee
that you hide under your pillow

hoping cinderella will grant you wishes
but she is not really a fairy
just a woman with new skin
and more urges than you have dreams

with a v-8 in her truckless want to
_____________________

daark


scribblenote: one of those replays of negotiations to improve the visuals of surrounding forests and wetlands.....anything sexually applied is cool and carries no extra charge.


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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-06-19 06:08 AM


enjoyed the scribblenote~~

M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2008-06-19 07:17 AM


when it comes to mother nature
the libido just lends itself to her
naturally ,anyhow
deep caves
open skies
and the many bushes between
pass me your pepporoni for my pizza
enjoyed the taste of this all

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2008-06-19 04:38 PM


I can say this... This is the second piece I've come across produced by your pen and I am still amazed at your skill and poetic orientation. Definitely going to be studying your poetry to see how I might better my own work. Great writing here.
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
4 posted 2008-06-19 04:39 PM


Oh yeah, and your picture is really scary.
ladylisa
Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
5 posted 2008-06-19 05:46 PM


Been awhile but enjoyed this scribble as well.  So well put.  
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2008-06-19 06:59 PM


You have an incredible creative force flowing through your pen, POET!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2008-06-19 08:36 PM


loved your offering Mr Daark... and the sexual connotation worked for me   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
8 posted 2008-06-19 11:10 PM


I like your first verse the best.  Something about the chill (I can feel it)
when it's over a 100 degrees outside.  I don't do sweat unless I've got good reason.


Stay cool, Mr. Mosey~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2008-06-20 05:59 AM


awwwww bluecrew you guys blow me away, I do so much appreciate each of you.  glad my picture is still scary, you ought to see the real me..that would make your mirrors turn to jelly.


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