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Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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0 posted 2008-06-18 08:35 PM



Your Tender Touch


When you hold me in your arms
Nothing else matters
Your tender touch excites me
Causing such passion to grow
Whenever you are here with me
You brighten up my days
If I should be feeling down
You always know just what to do
To erase whatever comes my way
When my world comes tumbling down
As it often seems to do
When I am there with you my love
You make everything seem okay
Just your touch is all it takes
To make this heart just melt away
Promise me forever and
Make it all come true
For without you there beside me
Each day is hard to get through
For the love I feel inside me
I give it all to you

6-15-07





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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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1 posted 2008-06-19 09:50 AM


Oklahoma's finest rose, your delicate, loving heart writes with such a "tender touch".

A most enjoyable read. I enjoy the sweetness and vulnerability of this penning.

May you forever be touched so tenderly by love.

With love and a hug,
Linda

Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
2 posted 2008-06-19 09:57 AM


what a beautiful portrayal of tender love...
I hope you speak from experience.....lovely
Ray

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
3 posted 2008-06-19 04:20 PM


Delicate and loving. Yes, this piece is definitely those, and more. It's vulnerability at it's most beautiful stage.
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-06-19 07:34 PM


Such a tender, loving outpour of your heart!

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2008-06-21 07:43 PM


simple, fine, sincere Romanticism!

applause!!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2008-06-21 08:20 PM


OkRose...

This sings!



K

graeshine2006
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7 posted 2008-06-24 04:56 PM


Does he have a brother?????  
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