as we really knew it to be

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Open Poetry #42

as we really knew it to be

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2008-06-16 10:45 PM

Sliced by desires once thought to be lost
at such a young age
why?
did they abandon the years?
when so much seem to be a part of life’s pulpit
to find one self looking in directions
in places misunderstood
when all the time
sweetness was there
to be found instead
Love was
felt by the touch of the skin
that simple cheek on another
Ecstasy
came in a nice way
a feeling a touch that seem forever
that we knew from the beginning
though time called it just passing
we knew it was right to save it
When we were young and when we knew.
as each sunset saves the other
our continued longing
from the first
till what we know now
and forever.
…and forever carry our sincere feelings
as we really knew it to be.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-06-17 03:10 AM

An enticing flow of poignant awareness!

Deeply captivating.

Love,
Margherita

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2008-06-17 09:52 AM

"a feeling a touch that seem forever
that we knew from the beginning"

There were a few lines in here that I really liked, but I think the ones I finally picked were my favorite.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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