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danmckaywright
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0 posted 2008-06-15 11:51 PM


how can we bear the standards of our grandfathers
when we learned so much from our sisters
mostly we sit, useless
our fingers touching the smooth face of mediocrity
while others walk shoeless
seemingly they're martyrs for my indulgence
invisible forces keep them at bay
leaving me to twiddling my thumbs
thinking of such trivialities all day
but thought is useless without action
the smooth face of mediocrity
keeps the words from leaping off the page
into a substantial reality
the lines of wisdom, will they come?
will they come for us?
or are we lost in self pity and distrust?
i think, yet just because i think
does not mean i am not a robot
thinkers can be lost in apathy
if they think in circles
the circle jerk of mediocrity
a certain social masturbation of ignorance
a celebration of deference
we help ourselves to their mechanical harvest
without realizing who works the hardest
and what is lost in the process
is everything we love,
for once i wish we had
the ability to die knowing
that we can experience so much
before we die, yet even as those
thoughts enter my mind
all my fingers touch is
the smooth face of mediocrity

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1 posted 2008-06-16 04:14 PM


Amazing introspective soul-search write, and you've left it open for pondering both past and future actions, while contemplating today.
welcome to the blue pages
and congratulations
on bringing your music dreams
   to reality

danmckaywright
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2 posted 2008-06-19 12:47 PM


I'm glad you liked it thanks for the comment and the warm welcome. As for my musical dreams, we shall see... I'm not quitting the day job just yet...
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