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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2008-06-15 05:19 PM

from ordinary calm
springs forth moments of needs
a tickle's submission
of how want truly bleeds

an outpouring feelings
a losing of control
rampant waters rising
to burst beyond the flow

submerged, under surface
waiting for it to break
life is a river wild
filled with heart's drowning ache

release all your tensions
once more into that breech
let the river take course
and satisfy its reach

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-06-15 06:02 PM

quote:
submerged, under surface
waiting for it to break
life is a river wild
filled with heart's drowning ache

Wow! I so understand this right now ...

Wonderfully expressed yearning.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2008-06-15 06:21 PM

~ and when those floodgates burst open, it is undeniably difficult to stay afloat!

As the old adage goes, when life gives us lemons ~ make lemonade. So when those raging rivers roil and rage, instead of fighting those turbulent waters, we might as well "go with the flow".

Sorry, I got a bit side-tracked there!

Fine metaphorical writing!

EA

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2008-06-15 11:46 PM

this is not just about a river; but every emotion that bleeds....one of your best!! WOW ....how true to reach such a surface when we breech the flow.....

I

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Life isn't about how to survive the storm, but how to dance in the rain

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2008-06-16 05:35 PM

let it rock and roll
yes............ride that river cowboy
xoxoxo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2008-06-19 10:10 PM

life is a river wild
filled with heart's drowning ache

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I can so appreciate the out pouring of emotions you write of.
You've got a wonderful way with words ct~
and it's always good to read you~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2008-06-21 10:53 PM

I like this.

Alison

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