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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-06-15 07:08 AM



old highways have a texture on their skin
like something I have tasted before
and am still hungry to know again

the lady trees seem to stand guard
like they know where eden is
and have their mouths covered in leaves

I guess I don't mind the mornings
when it still seems like night
and no one really knows my sound

but then I recognize the quiet of you
and how your buttons are elsewhere
as if you were in some other mind

and suddenly I am sipping that bitter wine
that burns the tongue of my eyes
and in the distance I hear the lady trees

with their vulgarity of laughing silence
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-06-15 07:32 AM


Overwhelming in its intensity and beauty, dear D.!

Your imagery and personifications are pure ART, to enjoy again and again.

Love,
Margherita

nebulous_nymph
Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37
Inertia
2 posted 2008-06-15 08:00 AM


the flavors of your feeling make for some fine feasting,,,,,thanks for the feed
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2008-06-15 08:14 AM


"old highways have a texture on their skin
like something I have tasted before
and am still hungry to know again"

this alone is enough for me~~


M

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2008-06-15 08:40 AM


ms mar, thanks lady poet for the touch


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ms nymph, thank you for smiling beside me on this one


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ms MMs, thanks babe for the eyes here

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2008-06-15 12:00 PM


There you go, Mr. Mosey does the backside of boheme drive.  

You make it sound so deliciously inviting, oh dark stranger of the night.  

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2008-06-15 03:19 PM


ms blue....thanks lady..always room for someone to ride along
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