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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-06-14 06:14 PM


As the soft light twinkles around
the eyes of the ever watching sky
the light reflects off of my skin
forming a aura around my angelic body.

There is much to observe and contrast
when you are discovering new areas
around your karma and mind
you haven't seen before.

Sometimes you hear the soft sweet sound
of a cello played by a performer
who's fingers are as sweet as honey
when combined with the everlasting sound.

Or you may hear the angry rifts
of guitar strings that make you
want to get up and deal with the problem
you have had before.

Or even sometimes, you may hear the chords
of a piano that brings you to the urge of tears
because the piece is conducted so perfectly
you can't ignore the sensation of sadness.

There are a lot of different things humanity discovered
but the one thing we have failed to conceive
is the value
of your own life, and the sanity of others
and even more important
the value of loving yourself as well as loving
other people around you.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-06-14 06:30 PM


Fortunately, I believe some actually have discovered that each life is precious.
A thought-provoking write.

graeshine2006
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The Prairie Lands, USA
2 posted 2008-06-14 10:52 PM


Very pretty!  
OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2008-06-15 04:09 AM


Wise, sensitive and very beautiful and a wonderful turn-around, Angel.

- Owl

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