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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
Posts 415


0 posted 2008-06-14 09:41 AM


There has been many a time I have
been hurt, been disposed of, been abused
and life has constantly spat on my face.

Yet, I still live on.

People have killed the soul in me,
they have rejected and neglected the desires
that a person needs to feel wanted.

Yet, I am still alive.

The steps of life constantly
turn into a slide all the way down
when I reach my highest point.

Yet, I haven't fallen.

Even when you are at your
lowest or highest point of depression
you can always find that bright light
that will lead you away
with a guiding hand of love and compassion.

I have found that out now.

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-06-14 11:46 AM


I hope you keep your mind on good things, Angel. I think you should make a list of how tou want your life to turn out and carry it with you always. Consentrate on that list when things start to go wrong and see if you can change your reality. Don't waste your wonderful talent.
                                   Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-06-14 01:35 PM


Angel, I am so happy to see the real you emerging like a butterfly from a chrysalis!  I love your poem.  It shows much wisdom, revealing light and that beautiful soul of yours (which they didn't succeed in killing).  Your poem makes me feel the way I do after a good cry when I start feeling the healing power of tears.  It is very inspiring.  Thank you for sharing it, but thank you even more for being so much happier.

- Owl

Ray Sharpe
Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
3 posted 2008-06-14 02:15 PM


Angel ...It´s so good to see you are looking at the light at the end of the tunnel ......I am happy you let us reach it with you.
you must have  an incredible inner strength.
Ray

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