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Open Poetry #42

Fragility and Transience

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-06-13 07:51 PM

Fragility and Transience

cloud-castle fantasies
in an Autumn sky

frost-fingered
Winter morning
  windows

icicles sparkling
with the rising moon

wildflowers in the
  vanishing spring

the warm parting kiss
of a Summer sunset

moonbeams dancing
in the gathering dawn

the first flash of sunrise
through the morning mist

all grand ‘attachments’
and endeavors of the
  the human heart

dream-ripples passing
in a poetic soul

   --- b. e. adams (6/13/08)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (06-14-2008 01:19 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2008-06-13 08:05 PM

"the first flash of sunrise
through the morning mist"
That is a pleasant wake-up call!
Throw out the alarm clock, just wait for that flash.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-06-14 12:38 PM

"dream-ripples passing
in a poetic soul"...loved this line...the whole of it oozes poetry --great write

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-06-14 10:36 AM

Bruce, I paused at each descriptive passage to soak the images in and to experience each and every blessed one.

I thoroughly enjoyed the "dream-ripples passing" through your "poetic soul".

Have a glorious day!

Love and Nature's Light,

Linda

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-06-14 12:06 PM

"Dream ripples passing in a poetic soul."
Makes me very happy to have a poetic soul.
Love your "deep time" dreams, Bruce.
Ida

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