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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Unforgettable Skin soft sweep whispers its cavernous fascination Unfolding the universe in eclectic tides Building, surging; sinking and welling to overflow Familiarities, still electric More than a jolt to my heart, more intimate than sound Moist, in precise and sensual remembrances An emotion set in glass and starlight Given name and wings to span the ages By sacred breath, made warm Tenderness applies to brush mere eyes Always refilled as emptied Copyright Kkh 6/13/08 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling--do you know I sigh, quite often and audibly after reading you? Beautiful, so very beautiful... and of course, as a fan, I heard the musical strains of "unforgettable" in my mind's soundtrack. I'm tellin' ya, Kay, you should bottle this stuff--it's that good!  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Tenderness applies to brush mere eyes Always refilled as emptied" What a great line! Such an exquisite write...amazed, again |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"An emotion set in glass and starlight..." now THAT assuredly is an 'unforgettable' line! Applause!! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Yes, I will take a whole case of this bottled joy! Dear Kathleen, thanks so much for all the inspiration over the years. Your poem is wonderful and so are you! Rich |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how appropro "always refilled when empty" for both the gorgeous scenery and your gifted words |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Heavenly. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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