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Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

0 posted 2008-06-13 07:17 AM

For Tedward …the faulty bear

Hold me in your arms and wipe away the tears
In the darkness of sunset    feel the breath of my fears

Deliver hope and desire
To the core of my soul
Turn the mists of my eyes
To a layer of gold

Let me devour your presence and savour your skin
Take my dreams to the heavens play the stars held within

To my smile we will fly
On the wings of a whisper
To my hearts craven wish
My longing will be there

When morning arrives with a contented sigh
I wake and look up to your one wonky eye

To me you’re the best    the knight of my road
A girl’s never lonely with a teddy to hold

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-06-13 07:58 AM

Ray... this is a delightful read.. thank you ...love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-06-13 09:06 AM

quote:
Deliver hope and desire
To the core of my soul
Turn the mists of my eyes
To a layer of gold

How absolutely lovely! ... and I can relate, ok I am a grown-up "girl" but still I do love those teddybears ...

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-06-13 09:48 AM

What an adorable write! If a man can do for us all that our 'Tedwards' do for us ~ then he's a keeper! lol Our cuddle bears set a high standard!

Cuddle bear hug,
Linda

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2008-06-13 10:15 AM

Hugs to you and darling Tedward. Just 2 things you got wrong. Teward isn't faulty and his eye isn't wonky. Tedward is full of character and his eye is special. Smiles.

- Owl

Ray Sharpe
Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

5 posted 2008-06-13 10:23 AM

Yes owl...the girl I wrote it for knows that very well indeed......she loves him all the more for it ....its a true teddy and a true girl ....thank you to you all for your replies ...It always delights me to read them.
Ray

graeshine2006
Member

since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

6 posted 2008-06-13 08:42 PM

OK Ray - you must stop this.... lol...it about brought me to tears! Of course, I'm also listening to music which put some more power behind it, but your writing is just awesome. Thank you for it! deb

Ray Sharpe
Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

7 posted 2008-06-13 08:57 PM

hi Deb ...thanks ...yeah ...music does it everytime for me!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2008-06-15 03:26 AM

Thanks, Ray. I'm glad you enjoy my replies. Just need to tell you that the smiles were not joking smiles (in other words, not laughing at what I said), but smiles of friendship and to let you know that I wasn't upset with you (well, not very!) about saying that Tedward was faulty or that his eye was wonky. I am glad that the girl (whom I suspect is you) knows that. Smiles.

- Owl

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