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Forest Lake |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Forest Lake soft clouds drifting in a bright, tall sky... bird-shadow pathways through the daydreaming hills… moonlight penetrating midnight ripples... (to fathom–dance with the spirits of these ancient waters) here, Natures leaves the mind without motion; the heart beyond all vanity, arrogance, and contempt; the spirit set free... to touch the Universe. ---b. e. adams (6/12/08) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"bird-shadow pathways through the daydreaming hills" This winged its way into my psyche! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, Is this about Eagles Mere. God bless us I even miss the place, after working there so many years ago. The place of my first real love, she was too old for me, but she was kind. I was one of "The Young Ones". Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce You touch me with your poetry. Thank you, Alison |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
A beautiful peaceful image ....it relaxes me. Ray |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
No one paints a picture of paradise the way you do, Bruce. Ida |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Stunningly vivid portrait  Beautiful |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Takes me back to my Couer d'Alene Idaho days in the mountains... wasn't there long, but this is what a it felt like. Nice write. |
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