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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-06-12 01:32 PM


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Standing on a street
Many long years and far away

Out of nowhere in particular
In the middle of the day

The sound of our cat
When I was a boy

Scratching to get in
At the back door


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-06-12 04:28 PM


Cat memories are bound to last!

Very intense.

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2008-06-13 02:42 AM


Five Paw Print rating from my cats.

And me?  Well, I just am a fan of your poetry.

Alison

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3 posted 2008-06-13 03:19 AM


Sometimes simple memories stay with us forever and surprise us every once in a while with an appearence.
                              Ida


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-06-13 07:48 AM


John... I love cats.. but I have two adorable miniature dacschunds instead.. a beautiful memory you shared with us... thank you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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