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Open Poetry #42

June Evening

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

0 posted 2008-06-12 01:11 PM

Her skin was buttermilk soft nestled in his neck,
as she lay there trying to imitate his breathing.
Thoughts float in the breeze from one subject to the next.
Curtains rustle and windchimes sing.
Frogs and crickets conduct a symphony.
A velvet sky holds priceless diamonds,
that an unknown jeweler has placed there.
The universe smiles and nods in approval.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-06-12 03:56 PM

Lovely, calm scene, Tina.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-06-12 04:26 PM

Oh, what an enticing June Evening, dear Tina!
Very lovely ... yes Universe always approves of love!
Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-06-13 02:49 AM

Tina,

Another one of yours that I love.

Alison

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

4 posted 2008-06-13 08:53 AM

Thanks so much ladies...

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

5 posted 2008-06-13 10:45 AM

Hi Tina, “Frogs and crickets conduct a symphony” I like them when they do this every evening.
Natures true musicians. Nice write. Prasad

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

6 posted 2008-06-13 12:27 PM

sigh! such a lovely image...I'm there!

Hugs,
Robert

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

7 posted 2008-06-13 01:20 PM

Thanks

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