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nebulous_nymph
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Inertia

0 posted 2008-06-10 01:25 PM



sputterlust-speak dewdropped her petals
minding them fresh and pretty-for-plucking

no question of loves-me-not

he watered her well and proper
knowing the secret of unfolding flowers

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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1 posted 2008-06-10 04:43 PM


Very interesting. Enjoyed.
                     Ida

nebulous_nymph
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2 posted 2008-06-10 05:24 PM


Ida, thanks for looking at it...my first jump-in-the-water (poetically speaking)...
glad you enjoyed it
mary

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
3 posted 2008-06-10 05:49 PM


ms nymph...this is so cool, can see the smug gardener working his magic...so glad to see you  moving the pen around...more please
Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
4 posted 2008-06-10 06:28 PM


A hint of sensuality here.

Me likes!

Corinne

nebulous_nymph
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5 posted 2008-06-11 04:15 AM


mr stranger,,,thanks for the kind words,,he's magic fortrue,,i'm better at scribbling with crayons, butt i'll try to push-out another sometime
nebulous_nymph
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6 posted 2008-06-11 04:21 AM


Corinne,
appreciate the peek, maybe a hint, yes.
I like you like!...maybe cuz we're from the same state

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