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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-06-10 11:58 AM


My mind is awakened
and I see colors
shapes, sizes, differences.

There is something
that has opened my eyes.

I see the beauty of everything
I see the light, I see the dark.

The love of other people
has melted this icy heart
that has been inside
of my own protective
dry ice barrier.

I see, I breathe, I live.

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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 569

1 posted 2008-06-10 01:48 PM


...and that, I think, is the key. Well done.
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2008-06-10 01:51 PM


Hello, very nice poem indeed, you're right we need to bring light to each other....

       thanks

       yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2008-06-10 03:08 PM


Oh, Angel!  I am so happy to read this.  Please print it out and stick it on your wall where you can see it all the time!

Beeeeeeeeeeeg smiles.

- Owl

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