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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2008-06-10 05:58 AM

You reside in the mists of my dreams
where every wish I’ve ever wished for
has come true
because it is when I am there

that I am with you,
the one who brings sunlight into
these cloudy days
when I’m struggling and feel
that I’ve lost my way
it is you,
that sprinkles stardust
in the skies.

It is here, where you capture my sighs…

As the dawn arrives
and night slowly fades to close,
it is then, that I will pray
for the sanctuary of night

to swiftly return,

that I might then, again dream
of a wished for reality
that my heart already knows

can never be.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-10-2008 08:12 PM).]

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2008-06-10 11:25 AM

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This is good.

John

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2008-06-10 11:41 PM

It is here, where you capture my sighs…

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Oh Donna, your writing is so wonderfully heartfelt.
Each and every sigh kinda got caught in my throat.
This is so sadly beautiful.

Big ol' hugs, gentle one~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2008-06-11 05:46 AM

John, thank you so much, appreciate you stopping by.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2008-06-11 05:47 AM

Lori, thank you for listening and hearing the sighs behind the words. You are such a doll hon, am so pleased that you are here. HUGS ~D

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2008-06-14 08:06 PM

Truly Donna, this is such a sweet breath of a sigh~

one more time now!!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2008-06-14 08:18 PM

Yo Gentle Spirit,

this is a nice presentation.

Love Bobby

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2008-06-14 11:04 PM

the night sanctuary
is just that state of being
where dreams can exist
behind the light of dawn
i know those sighs
light as baby's breath
lovely words here

sewasham
Senior Member

since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

8 posted 2008-06-15 12:41 PM

Really enjoyed this. Very nice. Take care and Have fun. Steve

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2008-06-15 03:43 AM

Beautiful, Donna!

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2008-06-15 09:45 AM

So beautiful, your phantasmal dreams, dear Donna!
... dreams not always remain confined to the night, your heart knows that too. But we can shape them to such perfection, that reality finds it difficult to manifest them in our lives.

There is joy and healing in your words.

Love and hugs.
Margherita