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Open Poetry #42
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Troy
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0 posted 2008-06-10 02:19 AM

Of time disrobed, sanctioned through her silken door,

Unto realms unresonanced that cling no more!

The least and all of nothing to inherit

In forever fields of unscriptured merit,

Returned to Sender as to life before!

A single fold in your robes

Of recursive time

Unfolded.
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steavenr
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1 posted 2008-06-10 03:36 PM

this is a read-it-again poem.  I love read-it-again poems...very well done
Troy
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2 posted 2008-06-10 07:57 PM

Thanks steavenr! much appreciate the response!

Haven't been here for quite a long time and unfortunately didn't realize I posted this poem once before!!
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