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woodland tryst in amber
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woodland tryst in amber |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there was a sometimes swallowing how your eyes had a brim and I was teetering boldly in your deep want to liquor and being drunk in the willing was not an issue I even considered until you laughed at my shoes how scuffed they had become trying to crawl back out again just to see if your sometimes was all in disarray like mine but then it didn't really matter my head was above water and your smile was touchable I guess I was taller than realized and our fitting was not unchangeable so we just let our wax cool in puddles _______________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*soft smile* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ trying to crawl back out again just to see if your sometimes was all in disarray like mine but then it didn't really matter ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this D.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and your smile was touchable mmmm... I like this line very much Mr Daark.. I do hope you think mine is... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
daark...love to disarticulate and digest your poems. i find them stimulating. certain parts help me recall old and forgotten memories. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The lesson was fun, dear D.! The funniest word I learned was "scuffed" ... I guess in the woodland it's better to have scuffed shoes than none ... one never knows what's creeping around there  Most captivating composition! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe _________________ ms r&b, thank you so much for the touch _________________ friend wooo, humble thanks for the read ____________________ ms mar, thank you special lady for your words |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey D Can you say "swallowing" in the Open Forum? A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...yes dear...it is hunting for those little birds up at Capistrano (grin) |
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