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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2008-06-09 05:10 AM


Faces write their freedom,
some smiles are prisoners,
some  glances are jailers.
Some  faces open windows
other ones close doors.
The beauty always saws
the bars of the manipulation,
and she escapes in the unknown
sometimes it is the tears
which write the freedom.

Certain faces build you,
the others make you wreck do,
really faces write their freedom.


[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (06-11-2008 02:32 PM).]

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-06-09 09:01 AM


I think this is so true, yann, and very observant of you. I think you have very good intuition about people.
                               Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-06-09 04:57 PM


I love what you have said here.  My favourite lines are:

Some faces open windows
other ones close doors

and

sometimes it is the tears
which write freedom.

I wrote one in a fairly similar vein called Cause and Effect.  I will post it now.

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-06-09 06:22 PM


Dear Yann, I think you got that right and said it beautifully. You love people, you see beyond the surface.

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-06-13 09:48 PM


Yann... you are a wonderful poet mon ami! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
5 posted 2008-06-13 10:27 PM


Hi Yann, rightly said and written.

“Certain faces build you,
the others make you wreck do”

I like these lines, so very true. Prasad

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

6 posted 2008-06-14 12:26 PM


interesting thoughts...nicely done
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