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aureoles' accident
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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slow slow dancin' as my fingers rake the lace of the slate blue crinoline so I can trace aureoles' accident as the last note slips like the bad wine on my teeth... grinding like an innocent and whispering confessions-- damned blushing into furious chattering of teeth and this naughtiness proclivity suckling my finger's sleep: haughty in the moment 'till I curl into questioning-- hands in prayer beneath my head. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Damn! The title alone is imposslble to resist "aureoles' accident" and then your writing draws me in with each word - and I come back to read again, then a third time. Finally, I write out a responce. And I say you amaze me with every piece you post. --- A |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How sweet of you to fertilize my "egg". (*chuckle*--I call those 0's in the reply box eggs) and by the way, you remind me so much of myself, already thinking poetry, but working so very hard and effectively to add to your toolbox. You, m'lady, are someone to be watched, read, and savored. You give me much joy.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Karen, there are not many who can speak out so wonderfully like you ... I love the title and every word. Captivating and mirroring a truth I recognize. Stunning work! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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smile...Margherita? I nearly didn't post this one since it's a fairly vague metaphor, I didn't think anybody would "get" it. Then I thought, "So what?" and posted it anyway. *chuckling* I should have known though--you have those eyes that see on through, and I do love you for that. thank youYou are a true wise woman.  |
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