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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-06-06 05:59 AM

lady of lanterns
in your copper indigo
with the shimmer he has known
like a drunken god accidentally

I heard of your wounds
when you were the she wolf
and your gate was unstable
like an arrow through the trees

you bathed at my brim end
lapping new days into your panting
I was the gray water touch
the still place with eternal stones

you made beauty out of bow ties
and strung your maiden bead jewelry
you took me to a young man place
and we drank of the dark root liquor

I knew you then, jane doe balcom smythe III
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daark

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-06-06 06:06 AM

how beautiful Mr Daark... your writings are always a highlight to my day/night

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-06-06 09:05 AM

The last line is the clincher.
Do we really ever know anyone?

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-06-06 09:34 AM

Ms r/b thanks sweet ms for your comments

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Ms sun,no I doubt we do, but we must keep trying. Also was attracted to the many names we all carry through our lives. Thanks K-lady

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-06-08 08:09 AM

Another beauty! How do you do it? Your muse is one mighty muse! She loves you madly, as she knows you listen so well.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-06-08 09:02 AM

ms mar..she loves me with madness perhaps...but she is glass and metal and the wind...thanks lady friend

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2008-06-08 12:47 PM

enjoyed

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-06-08 05:09 PM

thanks ms van

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2008-06-10 11:54 PM

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You write lovely. I bet she reads with a mask on a stick.

A

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