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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-06-05 05:01 AM


Until the Season

When time and circumstance
takes the one you love away
it seems like forever
until the re-union day.
Yet I am well aware that
we will not re-unite until
the season is right.

Still, I need you sweetpie,
even this very night.
When shall I look into
your beautiful eyes,
when will I kiss
your sweet lips
and one more time
have the pleasure
of holding you
tight?

JamesLee
03June
2008


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2008-06-05 05:29 AM


lovely James.. I hope it's sooner than soon for you... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
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Bangalore,India
2 posted 2008-06-05 08:27 AM


Nice write. Pain of separation is horrible. Prasad
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2008-06-05 08:58 AM


Anticipation is half the fun! ~ Mind you, I prefer the other half! lol


Linda

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-06-05 01:37 PM


Hi James, that's real love and very nice words,

  have a nice day

   yann

Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
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5 posted 2008-06-05 10:14 PM


that has touched my core.....beautiful ...really beautiful
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2008-06-09 06:59 PM


Your heart shines in its deep longing, dear James. Whenever it will be, it will be the right moment, indeed.

Love,
Margherita

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