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Counting Starfish
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Counting Starfish |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Counting starfish on silver stained beaches Moon rays lightly tapping on the shore Softness echoes just beyond our reaches As ebbs and flows of tides illume our lore Warm mist sprays like morning's dew Lapping laughter of lace-like waves Sentient dreams flow for the very few Wading sand dunes as sea-boughtslaves Straining softly, sifting star-lit sands Through mem'ries rife with silver beams Shadows fall through fingers, slip through hands Held by others so that it seems The two who walk as one on nature's shore Glow with lumined light for ever more |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Now I have to respond to this ....breathtaking...give me oxygen!  fine write my friend! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite blend of moonlit nature and shadowy human dreams and images. - Owl |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very beautiful. Loved the imagery. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your use of alliteration, adds to the musicality of this seaside symphony of sights and sounds. Soothing, rapturous, and rates high on my 'sigh meter'!  Linda  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very beautiful and soothing to the soul, Steaven. Ida |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I love this one! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nature's own symphony in poetic form. Loved this one. Joyce |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Steaven, this is absolutely beautiful and so totally after my heart, you can guess. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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