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jane doe of smoke |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you had those storms in your belly sigh I saw your foot prints in the green making shapes between the trees perhaps so I would follow you perhaps so I would get lost too inside the other side of your woman when you put jane doe of smoke on and run your fingers through your hair when you do that thing by the mirrors and kneel to worship that other woman that looks so much like you in her eyes but hers will always be more lonely you spoke of your favorites presentation and sorted your skins like cards I knew that look about my hands too how you would wonder where my mind is and would I stay attentive as you changed ______________________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your poetic excursions into the psyche of a woman are spellbinding, dear D.! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...nature is often a woman and she does things to me that stir my pen thanks lady |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D The more that I read this, the more that it touches me inside my heart. It's among my favorites. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you for peeking in babe |
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