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Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-06-04 02:25 AM

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

1 posted 2008-06-04 02:29 AM

Alison, spring delights every living creature on this earth. Nice write.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-06-04 06:03 AM

ms ali-san...it is nice to see you playing in the posies..

Ray Sharpe
Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

3 posted 2008-06-04 11:33 AM

Your delight infuses me..
living in constant sunshine is liberating and stiffling at times....sometimes I long for the spring breeze or winter sun.your poem gave me a taste of spring...thank you alison...i have loved all of your work I have read

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-06-04 03:17 PM

Sring is awesome, can't we see that ? You did...

Yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-06-04 07:01 PM

Dear Alison, this is precious ... I can almost inhale the fragrance of Spring through the monitor!

Your studies carry sweet fruits.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2008-06-05 01:52 AM

Cherry blossoms are special to me as the always remind me of my childhood. Lovely words to go with them, what more could one ask for?
Ida

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-06-07 02:12 AM

Prasad

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Alison
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D

I do so love the posies!

A
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Ray,

I am enjoying your poetry and am happy that you have joined us here in PiP. Thank you for that very kind comment about my poetry.

Alison
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yann,

Thank you for allowing your eyes to see the beauty of spring.

Alison
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Margherita,

I have an excellent teacher - and I hope that I do grow from his efforts.

Thank you for all your kindness.

Alison
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Ida,

Thank you. I love them too.

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2008-06-12 05:37 AM

Ali-girl.... stunning and beautiful.. just like you my lovely xx love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

9 posted 2008-06-12 08:30 AM

Excellent Alison, just excellent

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2008-06-12 12:50 PM

Alison, I love your assonance! ~ and you!

Thanks for this refreshing pit stop!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda xo

TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

11 posted 2008-06-12 01:13 PM

Ah, cherry blossoms are wonderful! As is this poem. Very sweet.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

12 posted 2008-06-13 02:31 AM

Roniece, Angel, Linda and Tina,

What a great group of people in this response. You all are among my mostest favorite.

Thank you for reading and enjoying.

Love,
Alison

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