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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada 
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Chocolate Chocolate-warm, seductive, and velvet. The blood in you veins pumping your heart… Louder and louder. Each movement you make are not your own, But the acts of the endorphins rushing to your head. Chocolate-white, dark, milk, and semi-sweet. The taste on you tongue lures in you mind, Asking yourself “Do I want more?” When you hear the reply you know what to do, Take another bite and throw the wrapper away. Chocolate-melting, dripping and delicious. I see you slowly biting it with savory excellence, Is there more for me to have? No, of course not, you just want it all to yourself. That’s okay though because, When it’s gone, you’ll have no more, and you’ll be pleading me. I added the “So What” in here and also added two more stanza’s. Chocolate-sweet, succulent, and bitter. Do you know what you’re tasting? Yes, it’s slipping through you’re mouth, And down your throat. You need more; you need that piece of chocolate. Chocolate-cakes, squares, and drinks. The unknown secrets of the past leak their way out, Pushing at your soul… forcing you to lie. You feel abandoned, tortured, and betrayed… But all you have you do is open the package, unwrap the piece, And devour it with a passion not known to man. ~*Julianna*~ |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
The one line in there where I had written "So What" was for school and I don't know how to delete it, just ignore it for now. Thanks! ~*Julianna*~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
JAFS, Getting rid of the double spacing would make this easier to read. Bobby |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Ya, I know. This was for a project in school and we had to double space everything, I forgot how to change it, so...oh well. ~*Julianna*~ |
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