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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2008-06-02 07:38 PM


I know I haven't posted anything in forever. been pretty busy with alot of projects but I really want to share this one.

The sun, is shining down
Why can’t,
She feel it’s rays

The clouds are moving in
And she,
Can’t find her way

She’s lost somewhere
Between now and then
She can’t forget,
Where she’s been

Spends all her time
Longing for
Another place,
Hidden deep within

God can you help,
Her hell end?
So she can start,
Living Again

I’ve seen too many tears
Roll,
Down her face

Most of them because of me
And the aweful things,
I say

God I’ll give away my soul
If it would help,
Her heart mend

So it is with all my love
This prayer,
I send

God can you help,
Her hell end?
So she can start,
Living Again

She used to have the patience,
Of a golden eagle waiting for,
the perfect place to land

She always was the strong one,
My little one’s guardian Angel
She’s always there,
Waiting to hold a hand

God, can you help,
Her find her way back
Where she’s been?
So she can start,
Living again
Yea God
Can you help her find
Heaven again?
So she can start,
Living Again

If you want to hear it, I'll send ya the link

[This message has been edited by sim0riah (06-03-2008 05:29 PM).]

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-06-02 08:45 PM


I would like to hear it...
sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
2 posted 2008-06-02 10:54 PM


Hey ARH I know your gonna love it. Go here
http://www.acidplanet.com/components/embedfile.asp?asset=1121376|1&embed=1&t=9569

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
3 posted 2008-06-03 02:37 AM


Nice song, sweet music and wonderful voice, surely created magic here. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
4 posted 2008-06-03 09:15 AM


Prasad

Thank you very much. I do believe it is a keeper for sure.

Rich

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2008-06-05 07:20 PM


Nice...james
graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
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The Prairie Lands, USA
6 posted 2008-06-05 09:41 PM


Very nice, very sad.  I know your prayer is heard.
K-K
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since 2008-03-13
Posts 153
Indiana
7 posted 2008-06-06 12:04 PM


I long for your prayer to be heard as well. Sweetness
sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
8 posted 2008-06-06 02:32 PM


Thank you so much for your kind words

Rich

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