navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » I Try (Sometimes)
Open Poetry #42
Post A Reply Post New Topic I Try (Sometimes) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-06-02 06:54 PM



I will try
to love again
I won't cry anymore
This is my love for you
This is my life
This is my future
I try (sometimes
To forget whom I am
I won't cry
for the love I regret
I will try to forget
What really I care
I try (sometimes)
For this precious love
I owe
This heart of mine
So I try to write my lines
Let me feel better
To make you happy
Let me take you
Into my heart
I try (sometimes)
To forget whom I am
But I won't forget
Who are you?
I try sometimes
To sing few words
Of my song for you
I try everything for you
just for your love.....

© Copyright 2008 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
1 posted 2008-06-02 07:22 PM


An aching write, Vandana.
Ray Sharpe
Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
2 posted 2008-06-02 07:23 PM


lovely....simply lovely
Alison
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2008-06-04 03:26 AM


vandana,

I think that part of your beauty is that you do try again.  You show how special you are in your poetry.

Alison

graeshine2006
Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA
4 posted 2008-06-04 07:52 AM


This should be a song!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » I Try (Sometimes)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary