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MarkG
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since 2007-06-21
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California USA

0 posted 2008-06-01 05:14 AM



until the end


our time together now gone
I will so miss your heart
the poetry and songs
until the end I’ll always care
as deep as love would ever dare
so go find your peace but forever know
I will always hold a place within my soul
for you and I to find a way
to change the past so lost and torn
no matter how long or old or worn
a faithful soul I will not let go
without you here and close again
redemption love sincere
until the end
my dearest friend
until the end


© Copyright 2008 Mark Gammill - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2008-06-01 06:13 AM


Lovely sentiments and well expressed.

Eric

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-06-01 07:11 AM


Beautiful connectedness that goes on ... it is the right attitude.

You said it well!

Love,

Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2008-06-01 12:36 PM


Love is energy, and although it may change in form, it cannot die.

The love for your friend continues on in your kind heart. In some ways, you may now even be closer.

I believe you are both fortunate to have known the other.

Love & Eternal Light,

Linda

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-06-01 10:19 PM


"until the end
my dearest friend
until the end"

good theme, well expressed

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2008-06-02 12:37 PM


Love remains once a person has touched your soul....enjoyed!
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