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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-05-31 09:25 PM


    Call of Appalachia

Dare to roam these
verdant summer hills…
(along resplendent streams
in endless wander)
with a calm, clear mind
and unencumbered heart,
where ancient rocks speak
with the quiet-thunderous
‘voice’ of Deep-Time
  certainties…            
and even the tiniest,
fallen leaf drifting
in wind or water…
shall connect your spirit,
(in the ebb and flow of
   precious, infinitesimal
     moments)
to an eternally creative
  universe
of boundless beauty and
quintescent promise.

     ---b. e. adams (5/31/08)



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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2008-05-31 09:30 PM


Take a bow, poet, for this deep-time beauty:

"where ancient rocks speak
with the quiet-thunderous
‘voice’ of Deep-Time
  certainties..."  
          
This is gorgeous!

"resplendent streams
in endless wander"

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-05-31 10:18 PM


Secondhanddreampoet,

Ah yes, I can still hear Appalachia calling.  Now where did I put my ear-muffs?

Bobby

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-06-01 12:31 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-06-01 04:10 AM


Ah, yes, Appalachia, a place of simple truths.
Your poem touches the spirit of those who understand the power of nature.
                               Ida

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2008-06-01 09:57 AM


I do love your mountain poems!
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-06-01 12:00 PM


Your vividly descriptive poem brought to mind a glorious vacation I once spent in Appalachia.

The call to return, has just gotten stronger!

Your imagery and verbiage are so rich and engaging!


Linda

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-06-01 12:04 PM


quote:
to an eternally creative
  universe
of boundless beauty and
quintescent promise.



... we co-create beauty when there is this wonderful awareness you express here so powerfully.

Very very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

steavenr
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8 posted 2008-06-02 02:56 PM


"to an eternally creative
  "universe
of boundless beauty and
quintescent promise."  

What a lovely phrase with a favorite word: "quintescent"

gilead
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9 posted 2008-06-02 03:14 PM


I love reading poems that are so well crafted that comment seems superfluous! This is magic in the sound of words!

Art

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10 posted 2008-06-02 06:39 PM


good read
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11 posted 2008-06-04 03:31 AM


Bruce,

I have always wanted to hike the Appalachia Trail.  I can only imagine how beautiful it is.

A

graeshine2006
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12 posted 2008-06-04 08:02 AM


Makes me want to be there.
Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2008-06-04 09:18 AM


Yes, the free cheese and black canned beef the government used to supply to hungry people was very tasty.  I must admit, sharing lunches at school was kind of fun.

Bobby

2islander2
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14 posted 2008-06-04 03:13 PM


Hi Bruce , in all your poem the instants (the time) are precious, you are in a  place but you recognize the instant you are here as unique, I always care for these instants too and I'm glad to find some in your poems...

Have a nice day

   yann

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15 posted 2008-06-06 02:51 PM


Read and re-read, this is a new favorite.
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