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Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
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Tenerife

0 posted 2008-05-30 08:19 PM



I met your gaze……and felt the sign

Hidden hopes began to rise

I heard  your thoughts……I´ve told you mine

The time we share I hold it dear

There´s a place in my heart... where you are near

I hear your hopes your desired end

I ask just this…….

Be my friend  ?

© Copyright 2008 Ray Sharpe - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-05-30 09:24 PM


Nice little poem Ray,

Of course I'll be your friend.

Bobby


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2008-05-30 09:43 PM


Dear Ray,

I thought to avoid any type of sharing
when I was young; but there was a teacher,
and a poet, and then...I was lost...

and then I was found!

Poetry will be your outlet, and you are safe
letting out your poetry, and songs, here.

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email
for a very Special Greeting!


" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
3 posted 2008-05-30 10:48 PM


thank you for the kind words bobby ...and thank you for the lovely welcome sunshine.....I may pluck up the courage to post another !
passing shadows
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4 posted 2008-05-31 12:30 PM


very nice

Welcome to Passions!

Alison
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5 posted 2008-05-31 03:12 AM


Hey Ray,

Welcome.  I like your poem and do hope that you continue to share your writing with us.

It's always nice to meet a new poet on the boards.

Alison

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
6 posted 2008-05-31 04:03 AM


Love or friendship, think of one for getting the other, to be content of one for not losing someone, very difficult questions, perhaps sometimes it's better to clear things up, one of my favorite words:
be lucid.

   have a nice day

    yann

Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
7 posted 2008-05-31 06:09 AM


Wow thank you all for your encouragement. you are all so kind.love to you all
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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8 posted 2008-06-01 10:11 AM


Welcome to Passions Ray.
Very deep thoughts, giftwrapped in a neat little package!
Enjoyed your entrance here.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-06-01 12:18 PM


Hello there, Ray! Welcome aboard the pip ship! Anyone who shares and cares enough to hear the thoughts, hopes and desires of others, is a friend, indeed! Welcome to pipTalk's "Family of Friends"!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel
  

steavenr
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10 posted 2008-06-01 10:30 PM


Welcome to PIP, and you will find (if you have not already) that there are a lot of nice folks here with whom you can share and be appreciated...this is a nice place to come when you simply need a friend
SummaTyme
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since 2008-05-31
Posts 13
GA
11 posted 2008-06-01 10:53 PM


Love it very nice.  I am new as well hope to hear more from you!
Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
12 posted 2008-06-01 11:04 PM


I am at a loss as to what to say ...you have all been so kind ....i thank you  sincerely ...I have only just started to write down my thoughts and for you wonderfull people ....oh yes I have read many of your works ...to be so welcoming of my first efforts makes me feel 10 feet tall ...again "THANK YOU ALL"love and peace to the world..Ray

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
13 posted 2008-06-04 07:53 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts...James
graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
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The Prairie Lands, USA
14 posted 2008-06-05 10:51 PM


Seems you've been answered to being a friend!     Isn't this a nice place?  I'm also new and can't wait to read more of your writings!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
15 posted 2008-06-12 05:33 AM


Welcome Ray... I know I'm a little behind in greeting our new forum members but I do welcome you none the less... again, I hope you are coping well with your Mom's loss.. my thoughts are with you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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