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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-05-30 06:24 PM



you were funny serious there
teaching my eyes to wonder around
the wandering of potential

and you called me friend slowly
but it opened my eyes quickly
just a flickering at first

then the layers of your lavender
like when you were a lady tree
and you were entertained gentle

at how our parchments might glue
themselves into memories for eyes
and maybe even the god of sometimes

when he was making sun tea afternoons
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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-30 06:34 PM


Wow ... my eyes were closing, but I thought to jump in here for a moment and here I am ... wide awake after absorbing the extraordinary charm of your poem, dear D.!

You are super beautifully inspired!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-05-30 06:37 PM


ms mar, thank you lady friend


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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2008-05-31 03:06 AM


D

This is haunting.  You so often touch me inside here (taps my breast)with the poetry that you share with us.

A

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2008-05-31 04:06 AM


You give new meaning to sun days and high tea,
as well as every little sugar coated,   finger tipped morsel.

hugs and lovies, stranger darlin'~

nebulous_nymph
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since 2008-03-02
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Inertia
5 posted 2008-05-31 07:14 AM


you are a Pied Piper on paper....
keep tooting your reed and i'll follow you anywhere.......

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-05-31 07:33 AM


ms ali-san, thanks lil one..I enjoy your reads

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ms bluezy, thank you teasy-pie, you are always a smile away


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ms neb' welcome to pip and thank you.  I feel smugly now, like ironman perhaps

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