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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-05-28 08:36 PM


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Somehow
You knew
They’d end up
In a bar

Those slender then
Too cool and beautiful
To be anchored down
By one man

Drinks
Have certainly
Gone up in price
Though buy less
Than they did before

Still
There’s bound
To be another fool
So let’s put out
The bait again


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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (05-29-2008 11:49 AM).]

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-05-28 10:00 PM


John,

Well, why not.  Nice work on this.

Bobby

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