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Under The Shadow of the Moon
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Under The Shadow of the Moon |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Under The Shadow of the Moon Earths' Iris of stunning blue, The luminous white of milky clouds, Radiant in contrast to the shadowed veils Of a face so fair, and yet, eyes shaded by frost; The frost of winter, a halo of barren hopes, The face before me, Which fills my soul with compassions pangs. You are high and beautiful, like a shrouded dream, But the sadness in your countenance causes me to blink. Sad and lovely, a demeanor tinted with sorrow, Much like a Willow, sleek and comely Yet, draped about the earths cold surface Hanging heavy with many cares. Enchanting, and darkened deep Under the shadow of the moon. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enchanting poem. Savored several times! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh how I love this, magical, wonderful, but of course you know I love to be "underneath the moon" especially in the "Night Breeze"... Enchant me dreamer with your dreams~ |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
What was beautiful, is that you would notice..... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A magical offering Brett, Ida |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh .You knew how to get my attention... So now You have it...   [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-02-2008 12:10 AM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Delightful words Brett, you wrote it well Thanks for sharing. Lindsay. |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
love it........ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So deeply romantic, very beautifully written, dear Brett. Love, Margherita  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Thank you all so much! I'm glad you all enjoyed it. And special thanks to Romantic Heart. I've been looking everywhere for a suitable image for this poem, and here you hand it to me on a silver platter. Yay! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely write, Brett, and Romantic Heart has indeed unearthed some stunning pictures. A pleasure to read. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Love it! ARCTIC WIND |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite, Garapan. Sometimes sadness enriches so much that beauty grows from it, if the recipient allows it. - Owl |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Thank you, Honeybunch and Arctic Wind. I am grateful for your visit and glad you liked the poem. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
You are absolutely correct, Sir Owl. Sometimes sorrow invokes a form of beauty all it's own. Thank you! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice flow of words...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Viele Danks, Herr Poets! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· [This message has been edited by XGarapanX (07-03-2008 04:43 PM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Hey, Garapan! Thanks for your response, but please note that I ain't a Sir. I am a female Owl!  - Owl (Diana) |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I am mortified! Thanks for the correction, Ms. Owl! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed the read, my friend....had to laugh when the owl found you in the dark... j |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Thank you. I'm a bit shaken but I'll be alright. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhhh this is a poem to hang a heart on "like a shrouded dream" exquisite |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I am pleased that it pleases you. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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