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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2008-05-27 04:45 PM




daydreaming

her backyard salt marsh
sunlight flecks the blue heron
daydreaming all day



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-05-27 04:51 PM


Oh, dear Marti, this is wonderful. I would gladly spend the day dreaming like this majestic blue Heron ... but with my feet in the air.

Gorgeous!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-05-28 01:46 AM


BEAUTIFUL!
        Ida

OwlSA
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3 posted 2008-05-28 02:08 AM


Loved the mood of the poem and the photo.  At first glance, I thought it was our (South African) Black-headed heron until I noticed the differences.

- Owl

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4 posted 2008-05-30 02:54 AM


I really like this.  What an amazing bird - she wears your haiku well.

Alison

Misty Lilacs
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5 posted 2008-05-30 09:19 AM


Thank you all for your lovely comments. Seems the only poetry I'm able to pen of late is haiku's, so I try really hard to put a lot into them!
And it also seems I posted this twice. Oh, well!

hugs, Marti

Sunshine
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6 posted 2008-05-30 03:24 PM


Marti, your haiku's are better than my nothings.

and the photo is lovely!

Enchantress
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7 posted 2008-05-30 08:58 PM


This is beautiful Marti..
Your words plus the pic..excellent.
Hugs~Nancy

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